My Bet with my colleague

[ph8888]

50 sheets of ilock

[tikogoh]

Best story yet!!

[hungryghost4]

Bro ILOCK,

My personal opinion...you may have gone too far. Everything was great till the point where you removed the condom. It shows you do not really love and respect Joan at all or were totally consumed by lust and revenge for the way she teased you.

After this sexual act....there was no love in the process, just pure animal lust...... I sense things will not be the same.

Pardon me if I misjudge you, but I really thought it was a great love story....and that both of you found happiness. But now It is clearer, you took advantage of a lady in her down moments and rebound, and satisfied your lust.

[Archboy]

Keep your own opinion to yourself.. this is a adult forum. Not love story forum. Thank you

[shinozuke]

Originally Posted by hungryghost4

Bro ILOCK,

My personal opinion...you may have gone too far. Everything was great till the point where you removed the condom. It shows you do not really love and respect Joan at all or were totally consumed by lust and revenge for the way she teased you.

After this sexual act....there was no love in the process, just pure animal lust...... I sense things will not be the same.

Pardon me if I misjudge you, but I really thought it was a great love story....and that both of you found happiness. But now It is clearer, you took advantage of a lady in her down moments and rebound, and satisfied your lust.

I'm more disgusted by your actions and level of hypocrisy rather than your opinion. As its is being mentioned time and time again, this is a adult sex forum. People come here to read, fantasize and pcc ourselves silly over a block of text. Not be a saint here. Go to a church or a temple or any holy places if you wanna be one. Not here in this forum.

Remember in mind, real or fiction only TS know. Just enjoy, share when u find it good and keep those hypocritical opinions to yourself.

Side note: Bro Ilock, do continue! The choice of words are exceptional and simulating... Enjoyed every single post!! Looking forward to your updates!

[Bob112]

Originally Posted by hungryghost4

Bro ILOCK,

My personal opinion...you may have gone too far. Everything was great till the point where you removed the condom. It shows you do not really love and respect Joan at all or were totally consumed by lust and revenge for the way she teased you.

After this sexual act....there was no love in the process, just pure animal lust...... I sense things will not be the same.

Pardon me if I misjudge you, but I really thought it was a great love story....and that both of you found happiness. But now It is clearer, you took advantage of a lady in her down moments and rebound, and satisfied your lust.

For Christ's sake, it's a damn fiction. If you don't enjoy this genre, then move one mate!

[BTech]

Originally Posted by Bob112

For Christ's sake, it's a damn fiction. If you don't enjoy this genre, then move one mate!

Its NON FRICTION!!!!

[dinzmarck]

That is why he wants to remove the condom so got natural friction ��. Bet Joan cry after sex

[demonhunter]

TS , I will look into your eyes and beg you to continue your story ....

[theclubmed]

let the story go on, unwelcome comments isnt needed at all!

[oeioei]

If you like what you read, continue to read.
If you do not like what you read, just leave the thread.
Win win for everyone.

[hungryghost4]

Thank you for all the negative reactions.

I must say the story has been an enjoyable one. I didn't comment on the style nor the writing, in fact I had previously commented that it was one of the most enjoyable so far. And I caveated to say it was a personal opinion.

I see nothing wrong in advocating respect for women and safe sex....even in a fictitious story.. There will invariably be some naive reader out there who thinks when TS wrote is the norm and such things can be done in the heat of passion or lust. By the wasy, I am not part of AWARE.

Indeed it is a good story which sounds convincing and real, that is why I shared my opinion.

It is a forum as all of you pointed out, so I think all of us have equal rights to comment on the thread, isn't it?

[MoJoe313]

Yes, hungryghost4, you are entitled to your comments. It is through comments the writer improves.

I found this story interesting up until James broke the cable ties. Then I struggled to read. Fell asleep twice reading past that.

Too much spent describing the sexual act, without success. So who is on top of who?

It sounded like rape too, which is a put off for me. I draw the line at indulging in criminal desires. Being in a relationship does not give anyone the right to rape one's partner. Sorry, just me.

Ts, hope you don't mind. Please continue the story for the rest of the bros. Thank you.

[hungryghost4]

Originally Posted by MoJoe313

Yes, hungryghost4, you are entitled to your comments. It is through comments the writer improves.

It sounded like rape too, which is a put off for me. I draw the line at indulging in criminal desires. Being in a relationship does not give anyone the right to rape one's partner. Sorry, just me.

Ts, hope you don't mind. Please continue the story for the rest of the bros. Thank you.

Thanks for the balanced view bro. Much appreciated.

[SammyNewbie]

It seems a long discussion already, but there are dark sides to everyone.

I think there are some gals that are arrogant, bitchy and sexy, and there'd sometimes be rape fantasies in me and that would turn me on.

There are some I think of screwing normally in a frenzied manner. There are some I fantasize about making fun love to by tickling them under the sheets.

Before you judge me, these are but fantasies. There has been no actual deed. Many of u may fantasize about killing your horrible bosses, but how many people actually do it?

Let's give this a rest. Like many have said, we're just here for the stories, not on some woman's rights activist forums where everything must be politically correct. Goodness, we already don't have many good writers left here as it is.