Big trouble in little india

[spectreray]

You are the best... Thank u bro ilock

[xiongdijiemei]

Fantastic story, camping for more updates!!

[kepodang]

Bro ilock. You have never failed to grip me with your stories. The characters are real.. the locations are real.. the ideas unique.. there are feelings that u invoked in all of us.. n not the sexual kinda feelings.. heh..

As mentioned by some bros here, if this is adapted to the silver screen.. you will have a local hit.. international too.. put in the sex and gore.. lets make it R21.. heh..

[ajlover]

This is damm good ilock bro!! Your story with or without sex is just so fantastic. Go try make a local film that put the other jokers to shame.

[Icecass]

GWEN!!! No!!!

[keano]

Why u killed off the good Characters... U sucks

[bombshell]

Gone..the kids are gone. Should have screwed Mandy then kill her mah..

[AboveAll88]

why did gwen have to die

[cumforme]

Call sign hibiki, smooth and neat, I admire your train of thought ilock

[frxxxx]

iLock simply griping writing. Thanks Bro!

[playhard]

How to search for previous work of bro ilock?

[iluvbreast]

My 2 cents worth....I like the fact that Gwen died.....解脱了

Jeff is still in hell and trying to get out........

Credit to your works bro ilikeoldchangke, the depth increases with every piece.

I guess what makes his stories so riveting is that it mirrors life....the good guys don't always win and in any fight, casualties always appears.....but we still root for the hero.....

[ilikeoldchangke]

Thank you for all the comments.

Some parts are hard to read, those parts are hard to write and edit as well.

The emotional roller coaster is part of the fun isn't it. To forget the daily grind and just immerse yourself in another world.

To kill a character is not an easy decision, not when i had to build it up from scratch. It's like baking a nice cake knowing it's going to be eaten and passed out into the toilet.

I like Gwen, i was deliberating her fate during early development, there were alternatives but i felt it's better to let her go. Wasn't expecting that big a reaction.


I don't want go into detail for the rest of my work but many more characters will not see the ending.

Gwen's part is touching, i teared when i wrote it, but there's another part i literally broke like a dam. It's really painful to write it, to paint that parting scene, and i think it's going to be very painful to read it as well.


Thank you for reading my work and for leaving a comment.


Please accept my apologies for being unable to reply to everyone.
Drop me a PM or a mail anytime.

Cheers

James

[JeanBase]

Thanks for a very good story TS, please keep going

[seanylit]

ILOCK... have I ever told you that I love you??? 😘😘😘