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Hi Bro ILOCK,
Sorry for coming in late to thank you for the wonderfully written story. The ending is tastefully done and without much abruption. I guess if there is an Oscar Award for story writing in SBF, you will definitely be on the list every year. |
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Really amazing story. The best there is.
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Hi TS,
The way your wrote your story reminds me of my favorite authors; Sidney Sheldon & Danielle Steel. TQ for the interesting story. |
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Best story i have read so far!
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Great job bro. I've finally had the time to finish reading the story. Awaiting your next story!
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This story was like a roller coaster for me. The things people will do when they are obsessed.
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Thank you.
I'm glad you all enjoyed the read. ilock |
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This is the best story I ever read on sbf. To think that sex can be combined with such a great plot, it surely is the best thing tt can happen.
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Thank you. Truly a master piece that I cannot describe with words but could only portray it with my imaginations.
Cheers to u
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good story
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Great story! I give u all my points if i can lol
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Bro, great story. You are a very talented writer.
Not criticizing your story - I know it's not real - but I found it very disturbing the way James gave up Cidney to be raped by Beng Soon, as well as the way he manipulated Selene and Aaron's relationship. He truly is a monster, a selfish psychopath, to abuse and manipulate others as he did. Cidney loved him and that's how he treated her. What a fucking bastard. I thought of an alternate ending as I read. Housekeeping mistakenly entered while they were raping Cidney. The police were called. James and Beng Soon were arrested for rape, convicted and sent to jail where they were repeatedly beaten and sodomized. I have a friend who was drugged in a bar in Bugis. She woke up the next day in a hotel room after being violated during the night. She was devastated and it took her months to recover. Many rape victims suffer for the rest of their lives. Some commit suicide to escape the haunting memory. I look forward to reading your next story.
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Old Chang Kee's stories are fantastic
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Yes and not only are they good stories, he actually finishes them. So many other good writers never finish their stories.
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Awesome story, TS! Awaiting for the next story...
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