The old times....

[zerofighter]

It is our heart that matter....

[Humsupster]

Wow TS bro, ur story really captivates me to read till the end, finished reading after 2 hrs one shot.

As a Christian myself, I am glad that you have eventually chosen the right way to complete the story. The crucial decision that you have done to end off this struggle is to get an external party, in this case the church marriage counseling group to help yvonne and her hubby.

Nevertheless, I have a small suggestion which might offend a lot of readers here which is to reduce the frequency of listening to emo songs, especially when ur emotions going uncontrollable. This will only sink you deeper.

Last but not least, I know this love relationship will not end just like that,as both TS and yvonne are truly in love. Only time will allow this love to slowly fade off. I sincerely hoped that Bro TS can walk out of this soon and rekindle the love between you and your wife.

Loving someone means we want the best for them, not necessary to own that person. May the love of God embrace your family and all the readers here.

Cheers.

[SammyNewbie]

Some curiousity brought me to this thread because it was bumped up and I decided to take a look. From a reader's perspective, the story was romantic and bitter-sweet much like 'A Wedding in September'.I suggest you avoid that book and not read it at this point.

From an author's perspective I liked how u built up all that tension, but you should have popped all the sexual tension at the point where she was on the bed with the sleeping pills. I understand however, why you did not, because I too feel that I have to be responsible to my readers and not lie or do things that are over the limits just because I can and it is a work of fiction.

I like the poster above me recommend that you avoid emotional songs at this point. He speaks the truth and I know that first hand. It's simply not good for you.

[zerofighter]

Originally Posted by Humsupster

Wow TS bro, ur story really captivates me to read till the end, finished reading after 2 hrs one shot.

As a Christian myself, I am glad that you have eventually chosen the right way to complete the story. The crucial decision that you have done to end off this struggle is to get an external party, in this case the church marriage counseling group to help yvonne and her hubby.

Nevertheless, I have a small suggestion which might offend a lot of readers here which is to reduce the frequency of listening to emo songs, especially when ur emotions going uncontrollable. This will only sink you deeper.

Last but not least, I know this love relationship will not end just like that,as both TS and yvonne are truly in love. Only time will allow this love to slowly fade off. I sincerely hoped that Bro TS can walk out of this soon and rekindle the love between you and your wife.
Loving someone means we want the best for them, not necessary to own that person. May the love of God embrace your family and all the readers here.

Cheers.

Bro... u r rite... too much emo songs will affect our spirit and soul.... leading us to deeper emotional entanglements....

[xiaomidnightz]

心痛比快樂更真實　 愛為何這樣的諷刺 我忘了這是第幾次
一見你就無法堅持 孤獨比擁抱更真實　 愛讓人失去了理智
會不會是我太自私　 拒絕更寂寞的日子 放不開　也看不見未來
難道這種不完美　 才是愛情真實的樣子

[zerofighter]

Tomorrow is Good Friday....

Above is some songs which i would want to dedicated to all christian brothers and sisters in Christ here in this forum....

let us not forget the blood which is shed on the cross on us... whatever spiritual situation which we may in... good or bad.... the lord will never leave us...



ABOVE ALL-the passion of christ - YouTube

May the gentle love and peace of the lord touches our hearts again....

[zerofighter]

Another of my fave christian song which always strengthen me whenever i am down... hope that this song will also minister to the hearts to you all whenever u guys r hurting or discouraged....



Power of Your Love - YouTube

[zerofighter]

And finally... this song is for some of us who feel far away from the lord... but the lord never forget us... Let take a step closer to HIM and he will take a hundred steps closer to us... his arms is always open for us... his eyes is always filled with compassion...



Don Moen - i just want to be where You are

Allow yourself to draw close to the lord and feel the gentleness... love and peace and joy from him again...... Amen....

[ben2011]

Long time no see.....

[zerofighter]

Originally Posted by ben2011

Long time no see.....

Bro.. nice song... a song which touches my heart....

[Tai_zi21]

Another song which i like recently

[zerofighter]

Originally Posted by Tai_zi21

Another song which i like recently

Great song...

[FirstTimeUser]

Hi zerofighter bro, this is my first time commenting on your touching story. I wish you all the best.

This is one of the songs I've been listening to and its probably meaningful here. Hopefully this hasnt been shared before in this thread though.

[Tai_zi21]

This song is for u bro zerofighter

[zerofighter]

Originally Posted by FirstTimeUser

Hi zerofighter bro, this is my first time commenting on your touching story. I wish you all the best.

This is one of the songs I've been listening to and its probably meaningful here. Hopefully this hasnt been shared before in this thread though.

Well done... great song... well written....